The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph provides information about the amount of electricity which was produced in top ten nations in 2014 and gives information about the amount of electricity which was consumed in the same nations in the same year.
Overall, it can be seen that the amount of electricity which was produced in 2014 in China and also the amount of electricity which was consumed in 2014 in China were the highest figures of the whole graph. In addition, consumption of electricity and production of electricity in Korean Republic was the lowest.
Looking at the bar graph in more detail, it is evident that electricity production in China was higher than in the USA in 2014, at 5,398 billion kWh (bkWh) and 4,099 bkWh, respectively. The amount of electricity which was produced stood at 1,057 bkWh in Russia, as opposed to 936.2 bkWh in Japan in 2014. Additionally, 871 bkWh electricity was produced in India, compared to 485.1 bkWh in Korean Republic in 2014.
Turning to the remaining data, it is clear that the amount of electricity which was consumed in China stood at 5,322 bkWh, followed by the USA at 3,866 bkWh in 2014. 1,038 bkWh electricity and 856.7 bkWh electricity were consumed in Russia and in Japan, respectively. Consumption of electricity in India stood at 698.8 bkWh in 2014. Finally, the amount of electricity which was consumed in Korean Republic stood at 449.5 bkWh in 2014, which was the lowest value.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, look, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.15609756098 349% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1181.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88016528926 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76194155494 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.371900826446 0.547539520022 68% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 339.3 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9294389913 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.1 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142791788696 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0882146973347 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414611445508 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116031647727 0.15604864568 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278441307905 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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