The given chart compares the amount of electricity manufactured and consumed by ten highest-ranking nations in 2014.
Overall, the electrictity production and consumption China was far higher than any other countries. It is noticeable that Germany was the only country that consumed more electricity than it generated.
In the year 2014, China and the United State ranked first with the production and consumption of electricity. In particular, Chinese produced about 5400 billion kWh and consumed nearly 5300 billion, this figure for the production and consumption in the United State were around 4100 billion and 3900 billion kWh respectively.
Turning to the other countries, we can see that the electricity manufacture and usage in Russia were the highest among 8 remained countries with the figure reaching over 1000 billion kWh each. Japan and India went after with the figures ranging from 700 billion kWh to 900 billion. The figure for the other countries showed a different in production and consumption by about 50 billion to 100 billion kWh. By contrast, German generated only about 526 billion kWh, however their use was up to 582 kWh.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
while, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1121.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38942307692 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86001933803 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514423076923 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 321.3 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.9780976916 43.030603864 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.125 112.824112599 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 5.23603664747 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184394382302 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105161509072 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0757620359215 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143609441911 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0501432745253 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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