The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates ten highest producer and consumer countries of electricity for the year 2014. In general, for most of the countries, production of electricity is slightly higher than the consumption.
To be specific, China is the highest producer as well as consumer of electricity with 5398 and 5322 billion KWh respectively. In contrast, Korea Rep is the country which produces and consumes lowest amount of electricity among the top ten nations with 435.1 and 449.5 billion KWh respectively.
Moreover, there is huge gap in the manufacturing and using electricity between United States and Russia. The difference between them is around 3000 billion KWh. To add, there is slight variation in the making and utilizing electricity for the countries Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea Rep.
Interestingly, utilization and manufacture of electricity is almost same for the nation Russia. To add, Germany is the only country which uses electricity more than it produces.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 183, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'consumes the lowest'.
Suggestion: consumes the lowest
...a Rep is the country which produces and consumes lowest amount of electricity among the top ten...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, well, in contrast, in general, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 156.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42307692308 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02862738323 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570512820513 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9937495116 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.75 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211362769057 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10229992386 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737180494535 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140103768487 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0769274627662 0.0819641961636 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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