The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The diagram illustrates how many billions KWH of electricity were produced and were consumed by the top ten countries during the year of 2014.
Overall, the most obvious pieces of information are that China showed its superiority over other countries which produced and used electricity at that year. In addition, the ten countries had a larger number in the production of electricity than the consumption of that, except Germany.
Moving to more detailed analysis in electricity production, in 2014, China had a higher figure that was accounted for 5,398 –the largest number of this sector. The second top rank was United States, which was listed at 4,099. These were followed by Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, which were ranged from around 1,000s to 500s. Then, the exception was Korea Rep, standing at fewer than 500 –the smallest number of this year.
Subsequently, it is clearly seen that the number of electricity consumed had a similar pattern to that of electricity generated relatively. There was the higher level of electricity used in China (5,322) and United States (3,866). The next rank were Russia, Japan, India, and Germany that was while the two former were recorded at1,038 and 856,7 respectively, the two latter were noted at 698,8 and 582,5 successively. Lastly, four other countries had a smaller number, standing at around 400s.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, second, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 965.302439024 120% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21621621622 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64301969737 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 106.607317073 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572072072072 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 283.868780488 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8512758114 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.272727273 112.824112599 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.63636363636 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202988203258 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0821928029848 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795596537766 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148244351207 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793543002927 0.0819641961636 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.