Given is the bar chart comparing ten countries which led by the produced and consumed electricity in 2014.
Overall, it is evident that China and the United States was shown their superiority in the production and consumption of electricity. In contrast, for the rest of them, the amount of these electrical energies was between about 1050 (billion kWh) and around 450 (billion kWh). In all countries, except Germany, the production of electricity was more than the consumption of it.
The first point to write about the bar chart is that the top of the list was China in term of electricity which is produced and consumed with 5398 (billion kWh) and 5322 (billion kWh). The United States was next on this list with 4099 (billion kWh) and 3866 (billion kWh). Although the difference between the US and Russia was so high approximately 3000 (billion kWh), Russia occupied third place.
According to the others, the electrical energy consumed and produced in Japan was about two times more than it in Korea, Rep with 936.2 (billion kWh) and 856.7 (billion kWh). The amount of the consumed and produced electricity in India and Canada had the highest difference with almost 260 (billion kWh) for these countries. last four countries on this list which are France, Brazil, Germany, and Korea was so close to each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 319, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Last
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, third, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1077.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85135135135 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5149540578 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486486486486 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 22.4926829268 164% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.10659925 43.030603864 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 179.5 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 22.9334400587 161% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180554450691 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121625574039 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100829689271 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157293636102 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109550508121 0.0819641961636 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.9 13.2329268293 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.84 61.2550243902 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.9970731707 153% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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