The bar chart gives the data about the generation and utilization of electricity within the top ten countries in 2014. From the supplied bar chart, it is conspicuous that all the given countiries, except Germany, generated more electricity than their needs. All the units are measured in billion kWh.
In the bar chart, all countries were sorted by descending order of electricity production. China, ranked as number one among countries, and USA that is ranked as second among countries generated and utilized more electricity in compared the other eight countries in the list. The amount of differences based on production and consumption of electiricity between these two countires and other eight countries were huge.
The top first countries' production of electricity were slightly different that their consumption of electricity and the diffrences were changing from 19 to 233. Korea Republic that is located in the list as a tenth country produced 485.1 billion kWh and consumed 449.5 billion kWh. China produced and consumed electricity ten times more than Korea Republic. There is a huge difference of consumption and production of electricity in USA. They produced 4099 billion kWh, but they only consumed 3866 billion kWh.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 289, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a billion'.
Suggestion: a billion
...ir needs. All the units are measured in billion kWh. In the bar chart, all countries...
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Line 5, column 15, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
...t countries were huge. The top first countries production of electricity were slightly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 965.302439024 108% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35384615385 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87510797899 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533333333333 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7057075227 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.88888888889 5.23603664747 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196608989856 0.215688989381 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10061857661 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064289292758 0.0843802449381 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143682603268 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221455073792 0.0819641961636 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.