Knowledge increases when it is shared, that's why some people think that sharing information about scientific research must be free of charge. On the other hand, some people believe that some knowledge is very confidential and important to be shared without getting money. In my opinion, both approaches have their advantages and disadvantages. Both sides will be analyzed in this essay before drawing opinion and logical conclusion.
We live in an age where new inventions happen almost every day. Some of these inventions can not be done without having sufficient funds. That causes them to halt their progress. In order to cope with these problem, scientists want to sell their important knowledge to other scientists because they are working hard to get these knowledge and it is not logical to give these informations without receiving a recompense for their work. On the other hand, by sharing information freely, it can be fallen into wrong hands and it can lead to wars and terrorist activity.
Conversely, sharing information freely is vital because it helps to keep us updated with the inventions happening around us. When cures of diseaster are found, it must be shared without taking consideration money because it is more important than money. Nowadays, many inventions are open source and knowledge are shared freely because they think that it is their duties to the world.
In conclusion, distributing information free of charge can help in certain aspects but can also be detrimental to society. My opinion is that knowledge must not be shared without charge.
- Some people claim that not enough of wastes from homes is recycled. They say that that only way to increase recycling for governments to make it a legal requirement.To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste? 33
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.Summarise the Information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons whee relevant. 67
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 73
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices.To what extent do you agree or disagree to this statement? 61
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 40, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
Knowledge increases when it is shared, thats why some people think that sharing info...
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Line 3, column 202, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this problem' or 'these problems'?
Suggestion: this problem; these problems
...t their progress. In order to cope with these problem, scientists want to sell their importan...
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Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'these knowledges'?
Suggestion: this knowledge; these knowledges
...ts because they are working hard to get these knowledge and it is not logical to give these inf...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, if, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75917326556 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55078125 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0747751151 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8571428571 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264596915536 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935948398262 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.084095784293 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168704828413 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0865917389556 0.056905535591 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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