The bar graph demonstrates the top ranked countries of the world for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
Overall, both the production and consumption of electricity by China was highest whilst Korea. Rep. lacks behind due to minimal amount of electricity production and consumption.Germany became exceptional country due to its enormous consumption rather than electicity production.
The numerous quantity of electricity produced by China, amounted approximately 5400 billion KWh whose consumption was also very similar to production.China was followed by United States, second rank not only for its production but also for electricity uses.Russia consumed 1038 billion KWh which was approximately numerically equal to whole parts of its production.Japan, India and Canada produced 936.2, 871 and 618.9 (billion KWh) respectively.Whats more, ranging from approximately 500 KWh to 800 KWh consumed by those countries (Japan, India and Canada) in 2014.
The most noticeable country was Germany,only one country whose consumption defeated its production by 56.1 billion KWh.France and Brazil were capable to maintain 7th and 8th place respectively in case of production.However, they were shifted with one rank below and maintain a position of 8th and 9th rank for electricity consumption.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 3.97073170732 428% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 965.302439024 116% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80729166667 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.60942760904 2.65546596893 136% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572916666667 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 283.868780488 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 173.039186313 43.030603864 402% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 223.0 112.824112599 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174495454794 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133085294693 0.103423049105 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0828162689062 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149016661645 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0875160910848 0.0819641961636 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.1 13.2329268293 190% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 61.2550243902 40% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 10.3012195122 187% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.01 11.4140731707 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 11.4329268293 136% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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