The bar chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The bar chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph presents the different industries that contribute to the uk’s gdp from 1992 to 2000.

Generally, it can be observed that the greatest contributor to the United Kingdom’s national budget is the it industry.

Initially, the field of it started with a little over 6% of the nation’s gdp in 1992. this number followed a generally increasing trend over the years, with about 2% every two years. However, the contribution of the it industry experienced a plateau in 1996 where this number stayed at 8% from 1994 to 1996. In spite of this, two years later, this figure skyrocketed to 12% in 1998 and continued to soar to over 14% towards the end of the time period in question.

On the other hand, the service industry followed a gradual incline from 1992 to 2000. Unlike the it industry, the service sector started with only a 4% share to the uk’s gdp. this number proceeded to increase by 2% in 1994 before becoming stagnant for the next 2 years. By 1996, there is a slow growth in the service industry’s contribution (approximately 7% from 1996 to 1998) before having a minimal increase in contributions by the year 2000 (8%).

Overall, it can be observed that the it industry had a much bigger contribution to the uk’s gdp compared to the service industry.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, in spite of, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 5.60731707317 268% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 222.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94144144144 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92432210399 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536036036036 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4447233904 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7272727273 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72727272727 5.23603664747 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125568214803 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0608788465315 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622875095528 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875772099403 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0714011208644 0.0819641961636 87% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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