The bar chart illustrates the sales in the world of four types of digital games: mobile phone games, online games, console games and handheld games during the period from2000 and 2006.
It is clear that the sales of handheld games keep the highest among those four types of games. The figure of mobile phone games and online games increase gradually, whereas the number of console games drops steadily.
In the period of seven years, the number of handheld games first rose from nearly 12 billion dollars in 2000 to 15 billion dollars in 2004, climbing further to nearly 18 billion in 2006 after a slightly decrease in 2005. Compared with the high sales of handheld games, both figures of games for mobile phone and online show a gradually increase trend.
The global sales of console games dropped from about 6 billion in 2000 to about 4 billion in 2003, and then fell to 2 billion in 2006.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 193, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('slightly') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decrease') instead of another adjective.
...ther to nearly 18 billion in 2006 after a slightly decrease in 2005. Compared with the high sales o...
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Line 5, column 325, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('gradually') instead an adjective, or a noun ('increase') instead of another adjective.
... games for mobile phone and online show a gradually increase trend. The global sales of console g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75159235669 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.10717349286 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509554140127 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 216.0 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1126135762 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388078836409 0.215688989381 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18571499209 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725257853254 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.237969068364 0.15604864568 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479943662949 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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