The bar chart shows the percentage of food and goods purchased in supermarket

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The bar chart shows the percentage of food and goods purchased in supermarket

The bar chart indicates how much food and goods purchased in a supermarket in three nations in Europe over a ten-year period, beginning in 1998. The data are calibrated in percentage.

Overall, It can clearly be seen that the proportion of food and good which were bought from supermarket grew in all countries. Further, purchases of food and goods uplifted by the greatest margin in country 1 over the period shown.

Looking at the data sets for food in more detail, It is evident that food purchases in country 1 stood at 10% in 1998. This figure climbed rapidly to 4% in 2008, which was the biggest difference on this chart. Similarly, purchases of food in country 2 and country 3 stood at approximately 20%and roughly 5% respectively in 1998, and 30% and 10% respectively in 2008.

Turning to the second chart, It is readily apparent that almost 3% of goods were purchased in country 3 in 1998. This value increased marginally to around 10% in 2008, which was the lowest difference between these two years on this chart. The percentage of goods which were purchased in country 2 in 1998 stood at 40% in 1998, as opposed to approximately 50% in 2008. Finally, goods purchases grew substantially from considerably below than 20% at the at the beginning of the period in country 1 to 60% at the end of the period, which was the highest percentage on the chart.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 446, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'at the'.
Suggestion: at the
...tially from considerably below than 20% at the at the beginning of the period in country 1 to...
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Line 13, column 452, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... from considerably below than 20% at the at the beginning of the period in countr...
^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, look, second, similarly

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 33.7804878049 154% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1137.0 965.302439024 118% => OK
No of words: 240.0 196.424390244 122% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7375 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93597934253 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76108561077 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483333333333 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 318.6 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0142536588 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.363636364 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8181818182 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334689786985 0.215688989381 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137466068878 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090020142755 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229972665274 0.15604864568 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624773717495 0.0819641961636 76% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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