The bar charts below show the Marriage and Divorce Statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.
Write a short report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
Write at least 150 words.
The bar charts demonstrate the marriage and divorce ratios in varying 8 nations throughout the period of 1981 and 1994.
Overall, most of the countries showed downward trends in marriage rate over the time, excluding Denmark. The chart displaying the divorce statistics, however, represents various patterns in the mentioned nations.
When it comes to the marriage rates, the USA had the maximum number in both 1981 and 1994 despite a sharp drecrease from 11 to 8 people per thousand after 15 years. In other countries including the UK, Japan, Findland, Germany, France and Italy, about 7 out of 1000 citizens got married in 1981. These figures dropped slightly to around 5-6 in 1994. Denmark is the only nation whose marriage percentage has risen over 15-year period, with an increase from 5 to 7.
Regarding to divorce statistics, the USA also had the highest rate of married couples who separated. In 1881, this number was above 5 per thousand. Fortunately, it fell slightly to 4.5 in 1994. Denmark saw the same trend. Its number reduced gently by about 0.1 across the period. The UK, Japan, Findland and France showed relatively similar trajectories, with a rise by around 1after 15 years. In all 8 countries, Italy reported the lowest rate of divorce, even when its figures doubled in 1994.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04608294931 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62388883658 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626728110599 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.3740984073 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2142857143 112.824112599 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140077859548 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045987109929 0.103423049105 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045314876135 0.0843802449381 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106141497713 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481820263858 0.0819641961636 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 40.7170731707 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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