The provided bar charts give information about average house prices in England and London in the two years, 1995 and 2013 and then compare different areas of England in terms of average house expenses.
Overall, average house prices in both England and London increased significantly from 1995 to 2013. Throughout England, houses in London were the most expensive in 2013.
In 1995, average house prices in England were about 13.000$, while in London, people had to pay 20.000$ for a house on average. House expenses on average in England rose by 7000$ over the past 19 years, to 20.000$ in 2013. This 19-year period saw a sharp growth in average London house prices, from 20.000$ in 1995 to over 40.000$ in 2013.
Regarding average prices of houses in distincts areas in England in 2013, it can be seen that houses in the North East were the cheapest with 10.000$. House prices in Midland were a little higher, at around 11.000$. In the South East, South West and North West areas, average house expenses were in the mid-range, with over 30.000$, over 25.000$ and 20.000$, respectively. London houses had the highest price with 40.000$ on average.
- The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013
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- The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city London and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$000'.
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...e house prices in England were about 13.000$, while in London, people had to pay 20....
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..., while in London, people had to pay 20.000$ for a house on average. House expenses ...
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Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$7000'.
Suggestion: $7000
... expenses on average in England rose by 7000$ over the past 19 years, to 20.000$ in 2...
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Suggestion: $000
... by 7000$ over the past 19 years, to 20.000$ in 2013. This 19-year period saw a shar...
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...in average London house prices, from 20.000$ in 1995 to over 40.000$ in 2013. Reg...
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...prices, from 20.000$ in 1995 to over 40.000$ in 2013. Regarding average prices of...
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...he North East were the cheapest with 10.000$. House prices in Midland were a little ...
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...land were a little higher, at around 11.000$. In the South East, South West and Nort...
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...ses were in the mid-range, with over 30.000$, over 25.000$ and 20.000$, respectively...
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...e mid-range, with over 30.000$, over 25.000$ and 20.000$, respectively. London house...
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... with over 30.000$, over 25.000$ and 20.000$, respectively. London houses had the hi...
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...on houses had the highest price with 40.000$ on average.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93846153846 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31942317525 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487179487179 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.435469377 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.434485599842 0.215688989381 201% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.240540842573 0.103423049105 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109901443333 0.0843802449381 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.344539067224 0.15604864568 221% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729403424897 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.2329268293 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.