The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.
The provided bar charts give information about average house prices in England and London in the two years, 1995 and 2013 and then compare different areas of England in terms of average house expenses.
Overall, average house prices in both England and London increased significantly from 1995 to 2013. Throughout England, houses in London were the most expensive in 2013.
In 1995, average house prices in England were about 13.000$, while in London, people had to pay 20.000$ for a house on average. House expenses on average in England rose by 7000$ over the past 19 years, to 20.000$ in 2013. This 19-year period saw a sharp growth in average London house prices, from 20.000$ in 1995 to over 40.000$ in 2013.
Regarding average prices of houses in distincts areas in England in 2013, it can be seen that houses in the North East were the cheapest with 10.000$. House prices in Midland were a little higher, at around 11.000$. In the South East, South West and North West areas, average house expenses were in the mid-range, with over 30.000$, over 25.000$ and 20.000$, respectively. London houses had the highest price with 40.000$ on average.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69230769231 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13627755413 2.65546596893 80% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.430769230769 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 195.0 22.4926829268 867% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 915.0 112.824112599 811% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 195.0 22.9334400587 850% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.0 5.23603664747 573% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.533695932105 0.215688989381 247% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.533695932105 0.103423049105 516% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.407418815016 0.15604864568 261% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593402855369 0.0819641961636 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 98.2 13.2329268293 742% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -109.53 61.2550243902 -179% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 77.0 10.3012195122 747% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.11 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.17 8.06136585366 188% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 11.4329268293 464% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 80.0 10.9970731707 727% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 53.0 11.0658536585 479% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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