the bar graph below shows the numbers of male and female research students studying 6 subjects at an US university in 2011
The bar graph illustrates the information about how the both sex in particular US university chose subject to study among six separate given subjects in 2011.
Overall, male preferred to study science subjects such as engineering, programming and mathematics, while female took an interest in linguistics in 2000. A noticeable exception for natural sciences, which had the same figure in both genders.
According to the bar graph, almost all 200 of male chose mathematics, compared to only under 50 of female chose this subject, which was over four times in 2011. Likewise, exactly 150 of male study programming and engineering, the number of female opt for programming and engineering observed the similar figure, at under 90.
In 2011, precisely 200 in each gender was recorded in 2000. Meanwhile, the amount of male chose psychology as the main subject constituted exactly 200, which was 25 more than that of the sex counterpart. By contrast, approximately 110 female studied linguistics, in comparison with the other sex, which made up 80 in the same period.
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- The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. 73
- The charts below compare five different countries showing the electricity used measured in megawatts or mw in a typical hospital during one week and also the number of emergency medical calls made by local residents during the same week The last chart sho 69
- Some people think that government should give financial support to artists, musicians, poets. Others think it is a waste of money. Discuss both view and give your opinion 89
- the chart below shows different methods of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008 83
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 335, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...x, which made up 80 in the same period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
likewise, so, while, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 172.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24418604651 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95060287539 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627906976744 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9583091927 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.75 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316107994743 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122007882603 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857411684945 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18979959739 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0732079687997 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.2329268293 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.