The bar graph shows the global sales of different types of digital games between 2000 and 2006.
The given column graph illustrates the information about worldwide sales of mobile phone online, console and household games in billions of dollars from 2000 to 2006.
Overall, it is clear that the sale of handheld games followed a rising trend over given period of time. However, the demand for console games remained almost stable and begun in 2002.
To begin with, during 2000 the about 11 billions of dollars earned from sale of handheld games. In following years, it followed by a gradual increase and till 2002, they made sales of about 15 billions of dollars. Surprisingly, the figure for handheld games remained constant from 2003 to 2005 which was almost 15 billions of dollars. Whereas, till 2006 the earnings from handheld games accounted for 18 billions of dollars.
Probing further, during initial two years sale returns from console games was $6 billions ;however, in later years the figure remained stable. Interestingly, sale of online games begun in 2001 with negligible demand. By contrast, it inclined gradually and upto 2006 the sales figure reached at $9 billions. There was only 3 billions of dollars collected from mobile phone games in 2002 ;whereas, the figure followed a increase and till 2006 reached at $8 billions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ames followed a rising trend over given period of time. However, the demand for console games ...
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...tant from 2003 to 2005 which was almost 15 billions of dollars. Whereas, till 2006 the earning...
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...ll 2006 the earnings from handheld games accounted for 18 billions of dollars. ...
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Suggestion: 18 billion
...ings from handheld games accounted for 18 billions of dollars. Probing further, during in...
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...ears sale returns from console games was billions ;however, in later years the fi...
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...re reached at billions. There was only 3 billions of dollars collected from mobile phone gam...
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...phone games in 2002 ;whereas, the figure followed a increase and till 2006 reache...
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...owed a increase and till 2006 reached at billions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21890547264 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4763928348 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.512437810945 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.031388538 43.030603864 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3636363636 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 5.23603664747 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181093303069 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0861158788844 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434066013816 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134413324453 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423146224191 0.0819641961636 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 11.4140731707 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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