The bar graphs show the distribution of employment among agriculture, manufacturing industry and services in 3 countries in 1980 and 2020.
The given bar charts illustrate the figures for labor force among agriculture, manufacturing industry and services in three researched countries in the years 1980 and 2020.
It can clearly be seen that services reached the highest point of the workforce in country A and C in 1980 and is also expected to witness the peak sector in both countries in 2020. However, agriculture in country B accounted for the most considerable percentage of employment in 1980 and is also likely to make up a vast majority in the same country in 2020.
Looking at the information in more detail, in 1980, the most striking feature is that the figure for workers in agriculture in B totally dominated those in A and C (approximately 70%, 20% and 3%, respectively). Also, the percentage of services’ employment in C was approximately 65%, compared to around 45% in A and 25% in B. In addition, the proportion of the workforce in the manufacturing industry in C was about 40%, compared to nearly 30% in A and 20% in B.
Looking into the future, the prominent justification is that services sector make a vast majority in employment in C (around 80%) while those in B and A are just around a half (roughly 55% and 45%, correspondingly). Besides, agriculture reaches the 40% mark in B while it occupies the same between A and C (25% and 20%, respectively). As a whole, the services sector is predicted to considerably increase while agriculture is anticipated to significantly decrease.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 150, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...nt in C around 80% while those in B and A are just around a half roughly 55% and 45%,...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
... and 20%, respectively. As a whole, the services sector is predicted to considerably inc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, look, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1221.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 251.0 196.424390244 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86454183267 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25956802868 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.474103585657 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 377.1 283.868780488 133% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.8393136812 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8888888889 22.9334400587 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.22222222222 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302586932631 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120644641342 0.103423049105 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117444896431 0.0843802449381 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203704351478 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134866839521 0.0819641961636 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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