The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

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The bar shows the percentage of people going to cinemas in one European country on different days

The bar chart compares the proportion of citizens in the movie theaters on various days in a particular country in Euro over a period of 4 years starting from 2003.
The most striking feature is that people preferred going to cinemas at the weekend than working days. In addition, the percentage of people going to cinemas fluctuated during the time surveyed.
In 2003, 40% of residents went to movie houses on a Saturday, while just 30% of people on Sunday. These figures then increased gradually to reach its peak in 2005 before dropping down to under 45% and more than 30% in 2007 respectively. In contrast, the percentage of audiences on Friday remained constant at 30%.
In the meantime, just 10% of dwellers went to the movie theaters on a Monday, compared to 20% on Tuesday, more than 15% on Wednesday and nearly 12% on Thursday in 2003. Over the next 4 years, there was a slight growth in the percentages of citizens in the movie theaters on a Monday and a Thursday to around 12% and under 15% respectively, while the figures for Tuesday and Wednesday felt gradually to under 20% and approximately 10% respectively in 2007.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, well, while, in addition, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 33.7804878049 151% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 939.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74242424242 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74268466126 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540404040404 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7836920772 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.375 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.375 5.23603664747 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165081354619 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0822608244238 0.103423049105 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0824560279207 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111991061348 0.15604864568 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0932492733072 0.0819641961636 114% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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