Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.
The map illustrates plans for two possible sites for a shopping mall in the city of Brandfield. It can be seen that the two sites under consideration are in the north and the south east of the town.
The first possible site for the shopping mall, S1, is just north of the city centre, above the railway line, which runs from the south east of the city to the north west. If it is built here, it will be next to a large housing estate, thus providing easy access for those living on the estate and in the city centre. It will also be next to the river, which runs through the town.
The site in the south east, S2, is again just by the railway line and fairly close to the city centre, but it is near to an industrial estate rather than housing.
There is a main road that runs through the city and is close to both sites, thus providing good road access to either location. A large golf course and park in the west of the town prevents this area from being available as a site.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'if', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.253588516746 0.268076937826 95% => OK
Verbs: 0.1004784689 0.116061578633 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0861244019139 0.0759168565197 113% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0478468899522 0.0366838410393 130% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0239234449761 0.0131127313244 182% => OK
Prepositions: 0.129186602871 0.155750635184 83% => OK
Participles: 0.0287081339713 0.0379272487307 76% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.04387470817 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0334928229665 0.0210936926555 159% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.162679425837 0.0948980150116 171% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0143540669856 0.00437022459523 328% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0143540669856 0.00967000014798 148% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 983.0 1161.00487805 85% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.9 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17368421053 5.90752243213 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73763899035 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.178947368421 0.337110787985 53% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.121052631579 0.247514529752 49% => More words length more than 6 chars wanted.
words length more than 7 chars: 0.0736842105263 0.171178102325 43% => More words length more than 7 chars wanted.
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0421052631579 0.112407865282 37% => More words length more than 8 chars wanted.
Word Length SD: 2.04387470817 2.65546596893 77% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.510526315789 0.546246751206 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.5208683456 49.3433353143 88% => OK
How many sentences: 8.0 8.93414634146 90% => OK
Sentence length: 23.75 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3126707646 42.9750493124 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.875 135.714022679 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.75 23.0094962315 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.75 0.689975730869 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.48048780488 0% => OK
Readability: 35.8552631579 47.7609492067 75% => OK
Elegance: 2.38888888889 2.94281807926 81% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441519703639 0.418131533498 106% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.228914245204 0.181151798455 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.104178267308 0.0850326197045 123% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.749904107697 0.706616315825 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122369320859 0.157042692854 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251392791679 0.228904883108 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952584502829 0.108899403657 87% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.494319962472 0.367819155151 134% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.106829000287 0.0812612215331 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.326287456378 0.316326947829 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602020304252 0.0921553760075 65% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.14146341463 0% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.08536585366 122% => OK
Positive topic words: 1.0 3.16585365854 32% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 0.956097560976 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 3.02926829268 99% => OK
Total topic words: 4.0 7.1512195122 56% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.