The below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The given map depicts the centre of a small town called Islip at present and a future plan for the development of the town.A typical town centre of a small town is given.The developmental plan might provide better connectivity in future.
Overall,At present apart from main road, roads heading to park and school are not connected.
Islip will have major changes like new housing in 2 locations and a dual carriageway which will interlink all the housing and other amenities.
Currently,In the south school and park are connected by road ,whereas two housing in the town remain disconnected from the roads.Like wise in the north countryside has no road facility.
In developmental plan,main road will be replaced by pedestrians only region and construction of new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be happening in the north of the town where country side is located now and dual carriageway which runs around the town centre.With the construction of dual carriageway whole town will be connected from south the school,park,new housing to the north of the town.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...re plan for the development of the town.A typical town centre of a small town is ...
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Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...al town centre of a small town is given.The developmental plan might provide better...
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Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... plan might provide better connectivity in future. Overall,At present apart from main ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , At
...etter connectivity in future. Overall,At present apart from main road, roads hea...
^^^
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...ousing and other amenities. Currently,In the south school and park are connected...
^^^
Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...th school and park are connected by road ,whereas two housing in the town remain d...
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Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Like
...town remain disconnected from the roads.Like wise in the north countryside has no ro...
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Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , main
... road facility. In developmental plan,main road will be replaced by pedestrians on...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shopping
...gion and construction of new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be hap...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , car
...ction of new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be happening in t...
^^^^
Line 8, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , new
...new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be happening in the north ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...geway which runs around the town centre.With the construction of dual carriageway wh...
^^^^
Line 8, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , park
... will be connected from south the school,park,new housing to the north of the town. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23295454545 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07616281011 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.571680995 43.030603864 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.2 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176254779577 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925801001539 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102411643438 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925801001539 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102411643438 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.2329268293 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 124, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: A
...re plan for the development of the town.A typical town centre of a small town is ...
^
Line 1, column 171, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: The
...al town centre of a small town is given.The developmental plan might provide better...
^^^
Line 1, column 228, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... plan might provide better connectivity in future. Overall,At present apart from main ...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , At
...etter connectivity in future. Overall,At present apart from main road, roads hea...
^^^
Line 6, column 10, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , In
...ousing and other amenities. Currently,In the south school and park are connected...
^^^
Line 6, column 61, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...th school and park are connected by road ,whereas two housing in the town remain d...
^^
Line 6, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Like
...town remain disconnected from the roads.Like wise in the north countryside has no ro...
^^^^
Line 8, column 22, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , main
... road facility. In developmental plan,main road will be replaced by pedestrians on...
^^^^^
Line 8, column 112, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , shopping
...gion and construction of new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be hap...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 128, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , car
...ction of new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be happening in t...
^^^^
Line 8, column 137, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , new
...new bus station,shopping centre,car park,new housing will be happening in the north ...
^^^^
Line 8, column 282, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: With
...geway which runs around the town centre.With the construction of dual carriageway wh...
^^^^
Line 8, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , park
... will be connected from south the school,park,new housing to the north of the town. ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, whereas, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 921.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23295454545 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07616281011 2.65546596893 116% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556818181818 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 22.4926829268 156% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.571680995 43.030603864 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 184.2 112.824112599 163% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.2 22.9334400587 153% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176254779577 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925801001539 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102411643438 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925801001539 0.15604864568 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102411643438 0.0819641961636 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.8 13.2329268293 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.41 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.9970731707 145% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.