Birth rates of China and the USA
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000.
The given line graph compares the birth rates in China and the USA and how these rates changed from 1920 to 1935.
Overall, the birth rate of both nations shared a similar downward trend over the period shown. However, the figure for the USA in various years is far higher than that of China.
To begin with, the percentage of newborn babies in the USA was 11%, which is 1% higher than that in China. Despite many fluctuations in the following 2 decades, the data for China climbed to 15% before significantly dropping to the lowest point of 5% in 1942, which was also the lowest point that the rate of the USA hit in the next 5 years.
Over the remainder period, the USA and China both witnessed a dramatic increase in the birth rates before dropping gradually until the year 2000. To be specific, the birth rate of the former reached a peak of 15%, which is 5% behind that of the latter in 1945. However, there was a dramatic decrease to approximately 3% in 2000, even lower than the lowest point in the previous years, whereas the USA also saw a downward trend but more slightly and remained the rate higher than 5%.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...years is far higher than that of China. To begin with, the percentage of newborn...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, whereas, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 919.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46116504854 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26009846159 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514563106796 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1385664291 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.875 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 5.23603664747 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360593509963 0.215688989381 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.174655037053 0.103423049105 169% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114658217434 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260169200603 0.15604864568 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117040856257 0.0819641961636 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 61.2550243902 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 11.4140731707 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.