You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of China and the USA between 1920 and 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph draws a comparison between the birth rates of China and the USA in a span of 20-years from 1920 to 2000
It can be easily identified that both figures surprisingly witness a downward trend throughout the examined period. Although the two trends were similar in terms of a general decline, the birth rates of the USA in most years was higher than that of China.
Over the course of 15 years, the figure for birth rate in America always remained above 10%. However, in the following decade, the proportion of the American birth rate decreased to below 5%. In the 1950s the percentage of the birth rate in USA increased significantly to exactly 15%, which was its highest point during the 80-years period. From 1955 onwards, there had a gradual decrease in the US birth rate, which fell to 7% by the year 2000.
During the same period, the percentage of the Chinese birth rate showed a upward trend despite some instability. It remained stable to 5% from 1940 to 1945 before reaching the highest point of the whole line graph, 20% in 1950. At the end of the survey, the percentage of the birth rate in China plummeted by over 10%, falling to approximately 2% in 2000
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The line graph draws a comparison between the birth rates of Ch...
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Line 4, column 73, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...entage of the Chinese birth rate showed a upward trend despite some instability. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 211.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62085308057 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47414246182 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568720379147 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3399038983 43.030603864 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.333333333 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4444444444 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.66666666667 5.23603664747 32% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213358714759 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0936128569952 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046846925338 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160149214975 0.15604864568 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0944406375023 0.0819641961636 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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