The bar chart shows the results of a questionnaire about purchasing coffee and tea in Australian's cities Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.
It can bee seen that people who went to a cafe for coffee and tea last month is the most. The next is buying instant coffee which is sometimes more for a half than fresh coffee. The cities Melbourne and Hobart illustrates the highest voices, at 63 percent with maximum 70 percent in the survey. However, in Adelaide is the least percentage between going for coffee and rea.
Instant coffee was popular in Hobart after coffee and tea, at 54 percent in total. But in Sydney it was not popular. Fresh coffee shows the least percentage compared to other residences. The highest was in Sydney, at 44 percent. In Brisbane and Adelaide it show the same 34 percent.
Overall, Australians prefer went to for coffee and tea in Melbourne, but instant coffee was more popular Hobart. Many people did not go for fresh coffee in Brisbane and Adelaide.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 832.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86549707602 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52222432385 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520467836257 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.5636129582 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3333333333 112.824112599 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 22.9334400587 62% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.33333333333 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177716409586 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704463656977 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597017009179 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13651499118 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0602393316838 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 61.2550243902 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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