The cart below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of world.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

Submitted by Nigaris on Fri, 01/06/2017 - 20:39

Six pie charts demonstrate the data regarding the proportion of water used for three factors in five continents.

As can be seen from the charts the usage of water has a similar pattern in North America and Europe. The fraction for industrial usage of water is with the highest numbers : the former is accounted for nearly a half , the latter is 4% more . Consequently, water allocated for agriculture and home is consumed together in almost equal percent of industrial but in a reverse pattern - 52% in North America and five percent less in Europe.

Similarly, three other parts of the world - Africa, Central and South West Asia - use water likewise. Agriculture makes up a particularly large portion in terms of consumption of water in all terrains(approximately 84%), while industry and house needs play a minor role in usage of water(about 7% in average). On the other hand, South America has similarity in usage with this group but not in the percentages, which are fracionaly different - agricultural usage is around three fourth which leads to the fact that two other options are between one-tenth and one-fifth .

Overall, developed continents devote most of their water in industry, whereas developing ones are tend to utilize water more for agriculture.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, if, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, whereas, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13106796117 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98601055958 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 283.868780488 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.672473159 43.030603864 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.125 112.824112599 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.75 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 5.23603664747 220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140399074129 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0673341352964 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351684951339 0.0843802449381 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0911363918082 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228726016511 0.0819641961636 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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