The chart and table below give information about what nursing graduates did after finishing doing their course in the UK in 2009. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevants.
While the given pie chart compares the percentage of nursing graduates working in different destinations in Britain in 2009, the table illustrates more details of the proportion of nursing students who worked in the health sector.
Overall, as can be seen from the pie chart, almost nursing graduates tend to work in the health sector. The most common occupation for those was that of a hospital nurse.
According to the pie chart, graduated students who worked in the health system accounted for 84%, ranked the first position in the working places. Whereas, working and studying students took 8%, less than a tenth of the former. The unemployed nursing students were 4%, the same as the proportion of graduates who applied for further study and did others.
Looking more details at the health sector, which dominates the working places of nursing students, it was experienced that there were 72.9% of students working as hospital nurses, which led the percentages given data. Following that, midwives accounted for 12.4%, 60% less than the hospital nurses. The community nurse stayed at the third position, at 10.3%. However, the mental nurse, paramedic, and others took less than their counterparts, at 0.4%, 1.3%, and 2.7%, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...pplied for further study and did others. Looking more details at the health secto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, third, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 198.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36868686869 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71193310485 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580808080808 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 288.9 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.680341564 43.030603864 262% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 132.875 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 5.23603664747 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0934672267841 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0356249173747 0.103423049105 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0392106338487 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0702723212751 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031700600984 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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