The chart below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.

Essay topics:

The chart below give information about the way in which water was used in different countries in 2000.

The given layouts depict information about water used by the different countries in 2000. Data is calibrated in percentage.It is clear and coherent represented.
It can be seen in Canada 80 percentage of water used for the industry purposes and very less Water used agriculture purposes. Apart from this in India highly amount of water used for agriculture purposes about 92 percentage while 3 percentage used for industries. In Canada and India Water used for domestic is about 12 and 5 respectively.

As far as trend is concerned the level of water used for domestic and agriculture are same in New Zealand about 46 and 44. On the other hand in China the water is mostly used for agriculture purposes is 69 percentage and 9 percentage water used for domestic. The Water used for industrialisation in and in New Zealand and China percentage and 22 percentage respectively.

Overall it is evident from information in Canada highly amount of Water used for industrialization and less uses for agriculture and domestic, while in India what to use for agriculture is a more than industrialisation and domestic process.

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...in India highly amount of water used for agriculture purposes about 92 percentage...
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... other hand in China the water is mostly used for agriculture purposes is 69 perc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, apart from, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07027027027 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26897897222 2.65546596893 123% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448648648649 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 283.868780488 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.649180942 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.222222222 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.44444444444 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240144457674 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149081737459 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114717807653 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191400326213 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0721706116502 0.0819641961636 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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