the chart below give information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Given are four pie charts reflecting summary of information about four categories of ages for two different countries in 2000 and prediction for it in 2050.
It is pervasive from the information supplied that at the beginning , in Yemen the most contributing sector was 0-14 years, while in Italy it belonged to 15-59 years. What is more the least contributing sectors in Yemen and Italy were over 60 years and 0-14 years respectively Surprisingly, projections for 2050 follow the same trend.
As figure shown, in Yemen 0-14 years will drop significantly from 50.1% to 37%, and equivalent figure for Italy will decrease slightly. Also, in Yemen 15-59 years and 60 years accounted for 46.3% and 3.6% of whole population which will jump to 57.3% and 5.7% respectively; it will be a slight change, while Italian in 15-59 years will see a shrink by almost 15%. Further similar to Yemen, Italian over 60 years will face almost twofold increase.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 787.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98101265823 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71773807299 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613924050633 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9832008528 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.166666667 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3333333333 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261700277797 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129083957661 0.103423049105 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773875108295 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189009249965 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713631146307 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.