The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Submitted by Ahmad_off on Sun, 07/21/2024 - 05:50

The pie charts illustrate the percentage of ages of the people in three distinct groups in Italy and Yemen in 2000 and a predict of these groups in 2050.
It is obvious that Italy has the majority of middle age people percentage in 2000 while in Yemen was less than half percent. By 2050 the middle age will decline in Italy lower than half and this percentage increase in Yemen. The adult group will not change a lot in Yemen.
As can be seen there were three teenager (0-14 years), middle (15-59 years), and adult (60+ years) groups. Yemen has a young society by 50.1% teenager, 46.3% middle, and only by 3.6% adult people in 2000, and statistics will show the 60+ years percent do not change significantly in 2050. Yemen 15-59 years rasie around 11% that makes teenagers rate decrease to 37%. In Italy the situation was different in 2000. There was 61.6% related to middle population and the adult range is located in second place by 24.1% that shown this is a old country. This rate will sugar in 2050 by raising the adult rate to 42.3% and fall the 15-59 and 0-14 in order to aapproximately 15% and 3%.
As a result this will make a problem in Italy and its government should very good roles for the families to bring children to prevent the old pupolation.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 527, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...econd place by 24.1% that shown this is a old country. This rate will sugar in 20...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, as a result

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1032.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 230.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48695652174 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25829284603 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521739130435 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 296.1 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.9046536795 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8181818182 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9090909091 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.23603664747 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17273642922 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757917456681 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492571594485 0.0843802449381 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119429500061 0.15604864568 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404191745711 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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