Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Always there is an argument that advertisements can affect our minds and make us think otherwise which leads to buying different things. Some believe that nowadays advertisements extremely expanding and people don’t care about them like before. In my opinion, advertising is a very important method to make people buy goods and company's products.
According to some, one of the best ways which be extremely successful is advertising. The positive side is people by seeing ads don't waste their time and money and helps them to meet their needs. For example, instead of people going to shop and looking for their goods a good ad that can deliver a clear message about the product can prevent wasting their time. but the minus side is it can change your mind. if you don't need a thing when see an advertisement would like to buy those goods.
Some others believe ads cannot affect our decisions because they are very common since people don't pay attention to them. persons daily across numerous advertisements and don't care about them. The most important point is ads can have sufficient effect even if they are so common. The unknown sector of brain analysis is all of them and you would be able to think about them. Although most of the advertising is junk and their goal is just to sell their products people can be affected when across with them.
Finally, it is not true to say by increasing ads people don't care about them when faced with them. I think advertising has a powerful dark side that most people don't know about it. It affects your unknown brain which can control your decision.
In conclusion, companies use advertising to sell their goods. Because of this, they make ads to deliver an especial message to people and make a feel inside them that should provide that product.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, for example, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 24.0651302605 175% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1485.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77491961415 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44583595151 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.520900321543 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9555225849 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2777777778 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239434088714 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865964198606 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0493535952902 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149614278526 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586095391001 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.02 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.