The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region

Given in the chart is the proportion of population on global scale, together with the rich disposition by region.
Overall, North America has the largest distribution of wealth, whereas China is a nation which had by far the highest proportion of population. Additionally, the figure for Latin America and Caribbean is by far the lowest both population and wealth shares.
As can be seen from the chart, the majority of population settle in China, with the figure accounting for just under a quarter in total. This number is followed by other Asia-Pacific's, with the figure being at roughly 15%. Europe and India share the similar percentage of population, at just over 15%. Also, the amount of habitats in Africa along with Latin America and Caribbean made up exactly 10% and a small 7%, respectively. Likewise, North America and Rich Asian-Pacific have similarity in population share, which just over at 5%.
It can be clearly seen that North America had the great amount of rich people whose proportion is highest among eight countries, followed by Europe which is 5 percent as much. Similarly, the figure for the wealth in Rich Asian-Pacific records just under one fourth. Noticeably, three nations include Latin America and Caribbean, China and Other Asia-Pacific had the same number of rich people, in other words, the categories for them approximately 5%. In Africa, around a minimal 1% of people whose circumstances is affluent. A similar pattern is repeated for India.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...similar pattern is repeated for India.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, likewise, similarly, so, whereas, in other words

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 33.7804878049 115% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 965.302439024 129% => OK
No of words: 242.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12809917355 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86674726377 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528925619835 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 283.868780488 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4317626454 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4615384615 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6153846154 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.84615384615 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 3.70975609756 270% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120454891622 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0481105235736 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618584270411 0.0843802449381 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106602649814 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772097363098 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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