The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region

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The chart below gives information about global population percentages and distribution of wealth by region.

The bar chart illustrates the percentage of the population and global wealth in several regions.

Generally, the highest percentage in the number of population can be seen in China, while North America is coming out as the biggest proportion of the wealth level.

The number of citizens living in China is accounted for just under 25%, showing the biggest population compared to other regions, while those staying in Rich Asia-Pacific and North America show the reverse. Coming second, there are hovering around 15% of people settled in Other Asia Pacific, India, and Europe, while the number of those in Africa are slightly higher in Latin America and Caribean.

When it comes to the wealth level, the number of people inhabiting in North America stand in the first place with just under 35%, making the highest proportion among others, and this following by those in Europe and Rich Asia-Pacific are slightly fewer than those in former with 30% and just under 25%. While people in the rest of regions having wealth life is accounted for by far compared to the one in the former with a small proportion.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, while, in the first place

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95721925134 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44496750694 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51871657754 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.2901409411 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 154.5 112.824112599 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.1666666667 22.9334400587 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134663503339 0.215688989381 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993813721928 0.103423049105 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.114509149743 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134505655745 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123504716326 0.0819641961636 151% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.2329268293 132% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.3012195122 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.08 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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