The chart below gives information about how people aged 25 34 are housed in the UK Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words

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The chart below gives information about how people aged 25–34 are housed in the UK.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting on the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

The chart presents data on accommodation of British people aged 25 to 34 from 2004 to 2014. Overall, the proportion of people owning a house dwindle over the period while the opposite is true for renters.
Peaking at about 59% in the beginning of the period, the percentage of home owners decreased marginally through the years to about 56% in 2006. The year 2007 witnessed the slight recover with roughly 57% people aged 25 to 34 possessing a house. However, from 2007 on, the ratio of home owners declined gradually and reached the lowest point at the end of that period with only 36%.
In 2004, the divergence between home owners and renters was the largest. The gap shrank as the proportion of renters began to rise. From only 20% in 2004, the figure climbed up steadily and ended at well under 50% in 2014. It is worth noticing that the percentage of home owners and renters was the same in 2011 and 2012 and 2013 marked the point when renters outnumbered home owners.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, well, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 804.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62068965517 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35889962725 2.65546596893 89% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574712643678 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.2206896187 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.3333333333 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113524099296 0.215688989381 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497749084067 0.103423049105 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528985247579 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0872495604171 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563356078271 0.0819641961636 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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