The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows Someland’s main exports in 2005,2015 and 2025 about meat products, dairy products and ınternational tourism as USD billion.
It is explicitly observed that international tourism will be the highest in 2025 by 8 billion USD and dairy products were peak in 2015 by the same whereas the lowest export will in meat products in 2025 by 3 billion USD.
To continue with, in comparison to meat export, dairy products’s exports were more than twice exports of the meat products by nearly 8 billion USD in 2015. Regarding to 3 remain exports in 2005, export of the international tourism was 6 billion USD while export of the meat products and dairy products were 4 and 5 billion USD respectively. In addition, export of the international tourism will more almost 0.5 and 5 billion USD than export of the dairy products and meat products respectively by around 8 billion USD.
Finally, international tourism will replace the high income of the export from dairy and meat products in the future.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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.... Regarding to 3 remain exports in 2005, export of the international tourism was ...
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...ational tourism will more almost 0.5 and 5 billion USD than export of the dairy p...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, regarding, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98455655913 2.65546596893 112% => OK
Unique words: 73.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.429411764706 0.547539520022 78% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 32.3663920345 43.030603864 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.666666667 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.3333333333 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 5.23603664747 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118310172573 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923651954215 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743797160818 0.0843802449381 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106312444761 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.085480663326 0.0819641961636 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.2329268293 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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