These days people in some country are living in a "throw-away" society which mean people use things in a short time then throw them away.
What are its causes and what are its problems? What could be done to address this issue?
Everbody knows that we live in certain period of the capitalist order and this order push us to consumption. Because of this, consumption rate is very high and in this term, many temporary merchandises are produced instead of resistant goods as old days without looking qualification. Especially, in conjunction with advent of technology, consumption rates increased. This status cause dependence of consumption and crazy expenditures, but this problem is solved Because of these reason, people use anything in short term and throw away it.
To start with, there are many fast manufacturing process anymore, so current everything, which is used by people, is improved and produced fastly thanks to technology. In addition, every single day, many updates come in our devices and belongings for smart aging. Because of this, everything can get old suddenly and people can want to change their belongings. In this point, dependence of crazy expenditure of people is triggered.
To solve this problem, company should produce long life product and people should be raised awareness about short term using and unconscious expenditures by authorities. If people get conscious and do not buy anything without needs, company neither produce too many goods and get update nor have to obey the capitalist order’s rules.
Finally, ıf we sum up to written above, the reason of using short term and throwing away are crazy production and claims by effect of capitalist order and advertisement. The solution is education and campaign about how can we spend our money for our needs consciously.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, in addition, in short, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30952380952 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91721461217 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.619047619048 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3192124041 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190876591742 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695849402626 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770407753055 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11063568136 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423351540726 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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