In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Everybody knows that unhealthy nutrition has become very common in around the world recently. Especially, people eat unhealthy meal in big cities which have fast life. And also, people work no longer as old people with muscle power. They work in the offices and they are motionless. Because of this reason, fast foods that are eaten in snacks damage to human body more. It cause gaining fat and thanks to it, people say hello to obesity. In this case, is there any protecting waw for people’s unhealty nutrition with fast food ? There are two way; implementing higher taxes to fast food and educating about healthy nutrition.
To start with, government should undertake many responsibility about unhealthy nutrition. This process should be negotiated in parlement and some regulations are confirmed for civil healthy life. One of them should be imposing higher tax to fast food. Even if this regulation is not discouraged completely to eat the fast food, it can be one step living healthy for people. Thus, people can noticed that government want to healthy generations and this is good.
In addition to impose higher tax to fast food, there is one more important way that is education for unhealthy life. Government must support the higher taxes to fast food with right and healthy nutrition education. Likewise, variety of campaigns are organized for this by authorizes. As a result, people are prepared to these regulations and that think is disappear ‘what if people boycott these regulations ?’.
To sum up, Everybody deserve healthy life and government should remind this to their civil thanks to apparent implementing and they should support this by education and campaigns. Therefore, more healthy generations are grown up and country’s warfare and life quality increase. Hopefully, all countries will consider about healthy life and necessary steps will be taken.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun responsibility seems to be countable; consider using: 'many responsibilities'.
Suggestion: many responsibilities
...start with, government should undertake many responsibility about unhealthy nutrition. This process...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, likewise, so, therefore, thus, in addition, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27062706271 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74321594589 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53795379538 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.0955323031 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.85 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.15 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.55 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264684694152 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088958051824 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622207767423 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176403577375 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0679683326919 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.