The stipulated bar diagram illustrates the information regarding Someland's main consignments volume in 2005, 2015 and the expected volume in 2025. The mentioned parameters are meat products, diary products and International tourism.
It has been clear from the data that diary products contributed more to the Someland's economy. In 2015 the milk products export was reached it's peak point with 7.9 billion USD. Whereas, it was only 4.5 billion USD in 2005. However it is expected to record a mere decline of 0.2 billion USD by 2025.
On the other hand international tourism showed an increasing trend over the period. Initially Someland was able to earn over 6 billion USD from international travelers, which was in 2005. After 10 years of time the earning were reached to a not so high rate of 6.5 billion USD and will expected hit the highest figures of 7.9 billion USD in 2025.
On the contrary, meat products showed and unexpected declining trend over two decades. It's highest fright volume was in 2005 (4 billion USD). The rate kept decilning in the following year and predicted to reach its lowest figures in 2025 (2.5 billion USD)
In conclusion, it is evident that milk products and international tourism contributed almost 75% of Someland's export market. The meat products lost it's market as the time flies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'consignments'' or 'consignment's'?
Suggestion: consignments'; consignment's
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ed its peak point with 7.9 billion USD. Whereas, it was only 4.5 billion USD in 2005. H...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...s, it was only 4.5 billion USD in 2005. However it is expected to record a mere decline...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is expected to record a mere decline of 0.2 billion USD by 2025. On the othe...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'expect'
Suggestion: expect
...o high rate of 6.5 billion USD and will expected hit the highest figures of 7.9 billion ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, so, whereas, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 965.302439024 115% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03181818182 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72400941128 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 106.607317073 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 51.2355045167 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1538461538 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 5.23603664747 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104671050845 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424367676318 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567768459122 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717377300562 0.15604864568 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555309743146 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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