The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below gives information about Someland's main exports in 2005, 2015, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows Someland's export products, specified by years. The report includes three main items as meat, dairy products and international tourism.

According to the data about meat products, the highest rate of export was in 2005. Following the next ten years, the export slightly dropped, leaving the incomes on less of $4 billion. However, the projection for 2025 shows that the rate will continue to fall in the same direction.

As for dairy products export, the diagram represents the lowest rate in 2005 when the revenues from the export were $5 billion. However, this trend lasts for a short, period and we have already in 2015 a serious rise in the dairy export. The chart shows that collected money was nearly doubled than in the previous decade. Furthermore, the outlook for the next 10 years considers a slight decrease of dairy export as well as in the revenues.

Finally, international tourism implied the lowest export in 2005, bringing something more than $6 billion. In the next ten years, tourism has encountered a slight increase, reaching the point of almost $7 billion. The projections for 2025 show that the increase will continue in the same direction.

Comparing the data about three main export components, we can see that meat products didn't contribute to the economy of some lands, while dairy products and international tourism have brought the serious revenues.

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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'well', 'while', 'as for', 'as well as']

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.274509803922 0.268076937826 102% => OK
Verbs: 0.113725490196 0.116061578633 98% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0823529411765 0.0759168565197 108% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0392156862745 0.0366838410393 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0078431372549 0.0131127313244 60% => OK
Prepositions: 0.141176470588 0.155750635184 91% => OK
Participles: 0.0392156862745 0.0379272487307 103% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.57607640212 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0117647058824 0.0210936926555 56% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.137254901961 0.0948980150116 145% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0117647058824 0.00437022459523 269% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00392156862745 0.00967000014798 41% => OK

Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1402.0 1161.00487805 121% => OK
No of words: 226.0 196.9 115% => OK
Chars per words: 6.20353982301 5.90752243213 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.73763899035 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.380530973451 0.337110787985 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.29203539823 0.247514529752 118% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.212389380531 0.171178102325 124% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.110619469027 0.112407865282 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57607640212 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526548672566 0.546246751206 96% => OK
Word variations: 48.4684172463 49.3433353143 98% => OK
How many sentences: 13.0 8.93414634146 146% => OK
Sentence length: 17.3846153846 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4335781645 42.9750493124 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.846153846 135.714022679 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 23.0094962315 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.846153846154 0.689975730869 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.84146341463 130% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 1.48048780488 540% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 46.5881552076 47.7609492067 98% => OK
Elegance: 2.82926829268 2.94281807926 96% => OK

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365977342725 0.418131533498 88% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122263137988 0.181151798455 67% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0489135633148 0.0850326197045 58% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.698262571761 0.706616315825 99% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.113060989448 0.157042692854 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187076970845 0.228904883108 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407579910309 0.108899403657 37% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.416221797501 0.367819155151 113% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.145428482423 0.0812612215331 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.253296151239 0.316326947829 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290080322253 0.0921553760075 31% => OK

Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70731707317 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.14146341463 350% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.08536585366 147% => OK
Positive topic words: 3.0 3.16585365854 95% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 0.956097560976 314% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 3.02926829268 198% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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