The chart below gives the percentage of social media users by age in Jamestown in 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features. Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart represents the percentage of the social media users in Jamestown in 2018 compared by their age.
Firstly, regarded to the chart, there is 40% of the social media users in Jamestown in 2018 are adolescents, who are between 13 and 25 years, which is the highest percentage of all those social media users. Moreover, the second highest percentage of those social media users are the users that are between 26 and 35 years, they are just over a third of those social media users.
On the other hand, the users over 55 years represent the lowest percentage, which is only 2% of the Jamestown’s social media users. Furthermore, it is clear that the Jamestown’s social media users who are between 36 and 45 years have almost a similar proportion of those who are between 46 and 55, which is 18% and 10% respectively.
In brief, the data clearly indicate that the users who are between 13 and 25 years old have almost the same percentage than the users that are 26 and 35 years old, unlike the people who are 36 or older that use less the social media throughout the entire period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 183, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
... 26 and 35 years old, unlike the people who are 36 or older that use less the social me...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...al media throughout the entire period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, second, so, third, in brief, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 3.15609756098 412% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60714285714 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47475277374 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448979591837 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3545760913 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.5 112.824112599 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.6666666667 22.9334400587 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.1666666667 5.23603664747 271% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256424295111 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178465768707 0.103423049105 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0903028198234 0.0843802449381 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202603515772 0.15604864568 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977836846333 0.0819641961636 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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