The chart below provides details about the ownership of electrical appliances and the number of hours spent on housework for the period of 1920 to 2019.
The graphs provide information about variance in electrical appliance ownership, along with the number of hours spent on house chores during the period 1920-2019 in a
single country. Overall, by 2019 refrigerators and vacuum cleaners are more commonly found in households when compared to washing machines, which supports the reducing
trend in time spent in housework.
While refrigerators and vacuum cleaners grew to become commonly found appliances in every household by 2019(100% for both), however, in 1920 no one owned a refrigerator
but a vacuum cleaner was owned by 30 per cent. On the other hand, washing machines still remain an option, not a necessity, only increasing from 40%(1920) to 75%(2019)
with a slight dip observed in 1980.
The number of hours spent completing daily house chores saw a significant decrease, reducing from 50 hours spent per week(1920) to just 10 hours per week(2019). The
the highest decrement was seen during the period 1920(50 hours) to 1960(20 hours), during the same time significant inclination was observed towards all the electrical
appliances.
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- The chart below provides details about the ownership of electrical appliances and the number of hours spent on housework for the period of 1920 to 2019 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3918128655 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79314309881 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 20.6188964033 43.030603864 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 153.666666667 112.824112599 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 22.9334400587 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318675785108 0.215688989381 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.149224833125 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.131448935483 0.0843802449381 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129142632981 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136777108518 0.0819641961636 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.2 13.2329268293 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.28 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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