The presented bar graph enumerates how consumers allocated the share of depletion on cars, computers, books, perfume, and cameras in two major nations the UK and France through the year 2010.
Overall, according to the chart, Cars category occupied the main outlay, in comparison, Perfume made up the lowest significant index of the table.
It is obvious, residents in these two countries had a big concern about cars that showed they cost 400,000 pounds and 450,000 pounds, respectively to France and the UK. Moreover, second and third items which were people mostly expense their purchase to buy belonging to computers and books. With computer had no disparity, in the opposite side, there were several differences ratio just 100,000 pounds sterling in book category between France and the Uk.
On the other hand, perfume was the least concern product which took the smallest proportion of inhabitants for 200,000 pounds and nearly 150,000 pounds, respectively to France and the Uk. But, cameras column cost illustrated the enormous rate, the cameras expenditure of people in the United Kingdom more ad double as user cost for cameras in France with the ratio between 200,000 pounds different.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
...lowest significant index of the table. It is obvious, residents in these two co...
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Message: Did you mean 'by'?
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...people mostly expense their purchase to buy belonging to computers and books. With ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'differences'' or 'difference's'?
Suggestion: differences'; difference's
...n the opposite side, there were several differences ratio just 100,000 pounds sterling in b...
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...ok category between France and the Uk. On the other hand, perfume was the least...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'cameras'' or 'camera's'?
Suggestion: cameras'; camera's
...cost illustrated the enormous rate, the cameras expenditure of people in the United Kin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, second, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25520833333 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55180164262 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 165.03987397 43.030603864 384% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.8 112.824112599 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 5.23603664747 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104863209822 0.215688989381 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598584260104 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050724544075 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0627604668223 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376711824932 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.3012195122 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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