The chart below illustrates information on the number of hours spent on working per week by industrial sector in France, Sweden, Denmark and the UK in 2002. In general, a smaller percentage of workers in France spent 36-40 hours for working than in other countries
According to the chart, most of workers in France only used 31-35 hours to work and it accounted for a half of the workers (50%). the second largest portion of people who worked for 36-40 hours was almost 35%. On the other hand, Denmark, Sweden and the UK witnessed the highest ratio of people working for 36-40 hours, which was quite different from that of France. The second and the third place came from 31-35 hours and 41-45 hours workers ( 25% and 10% in Denmark; 35% and 30% in Sweden.
In the UK, the first place was like Denmark and Sweden. The second highest fraction of working hour per week in the UK was more than 50 hours workers. The number of 46-50 hours and 41-45 hours per week constituted nearly 20% and about 14% respectively.
To sum up, workers in France spent the least of times for working. Whereas, in other countries worked 36-40 hours per week
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the workers') or simply say ''most workers''.
Suggestion: most of the workers; most workers
...ther countries According to the chart, most of workers in France only used 31-35 hours to work...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...ccounted for a half of the workers 50%. the second largest portion of people who wo...
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Line 2, column 441, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...from 31-35 hours and 41-45 hours workers 25% and 10% in Denmark; 35% and 30% in S...
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...e spent the least of times for working. Whereas, in other countries worked 36-40 hours ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, third, whereas, in general, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 932.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 203.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59113300493 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22168033816 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487684729064 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2705260708 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142788750521 0.215688989381 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781661838031 0.103423049105 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0981745093992 0.0843802449381 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122964724483 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0814668591338 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 85.02 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 11.4140731707 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.06136585366 87% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.