The bar chart compares and contrasts the changes in the proportion of population in China, India, the USA and Japan between 1950 and 2000 with future projections for 2050.
Overall, China accounted for the largest percentages of world's population ,however, these figures are predicted to decrease with India taking the lead in the next five decades. Similarly, a reduction in population numbers will likely to be seen among Americans and Japanese whose people make up all time low percentages.
It can be noticed that countries each having more than a fifth of world's population, namely China and India, indicate a reverse trend. The former had about a quarter percent of total population share in 1950 and 2000, but in the next fifty years, the figure is likely to drop to about 18%. By contrast, the latter rose from 15% to a moderate 18% in the first five decades and it will continue to increase to reach the highest level of more than 20%, surpassing China with a slight difference till 2050.
Turning to the countries indicating less than 10% in their population rates, the percentage of Americans declined from 10% to about 7% in 2000 and it is expected to remain unchanged. The remaining category, Japan, which is responsible for the lowest proportions , is said to be under 5% by 2050.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, similarly
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 965.302439024 112% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89592760181 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64812766832 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606334841629 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 29.1887713856 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.625 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271410924488 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103780387728 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528363860738 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158319825721 0.15604864568 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0357487694062 0.0819641961636 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 61.2550243902 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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