The chart below show the population size in two countries in Uk from 1700 to 2000

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The chart below show the population size in two countries in Uk from 1700 to 2000

The bar chat illustrate the number of residents and the number of of births and deaths per 1000 people in England and Wales in the years between 1700 to 2000.

Overall, there was a significant rise in the population size in the countries given over 4 centuries. While the figures for the second chart appeared to decrease, birth rates were much higher than death rates during period shown.

In 1700, the number of inhabitants in England and Wales was only 5 millions. This number doubled after a century to 10 millions, followed by a significant increase to over 25 millions and 40 millions in the years of 1900 and 2000, respectively.

In terms of birth and mortality rate in two countries, in the initial stage, there were approximately 25 births and 30 deaths per 1000 people. These numbers peaked in 1800 to nearly 38 and 31 per 1000 people prior to witnessing a free fall in the final stage. The gap between birth and death rate, in contrast, remained relatively stable at 5 per 1000 people until it was about triple of that of previous period seeing that death rate droped more drastically.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: of
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, while, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 913.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 193.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73056994819 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5639764313 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.114634146341 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6665719696 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.125 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.125 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.101410323602 0.215688989381 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0509019378505 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505088924895 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0689004684276 0.15604864568 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0399134769603 0.0819641961636 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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