The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
Write a report for university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The double bar graph illustrates, information regarding amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status during 1989 to 1999. Overall, it can be seen that unemployed and retired people enjoyed most with males surpassing females.
To begin with, in full time employed category men and women had minimum amount of time for leisure activities about 50 hours a week for males and 38 hours for females which is least among all categories. Part time employed females had about 40 hours of enjoyment time per week, while housewifes got 50 hours of leisure time. In both unemployed and retired categories both males and females had a tremendous amount of time for recreational activities with females enjoying 78 hours whereas, males about 90 hours per week. In general males got about 20 more hours of enjoyment then opposite gender. In the future too, this trend will continue.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...89 to 1999. Overall, it can be seen that unemployed and retired people enjoyed mo...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...urpassing females. To begin with, in full time employed category men and women had min...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: Part-time
...es which is least among all categories. Part time employed females had about 40 hours of ...
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Line 3, column 598, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ours of enjoyment then opposite gender. In the future too, this trend will continu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, then, whereas, while, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 755.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 150.0 196.424390244 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03333333333 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55211459165 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2873753903 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.857142857 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232725357844 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117187475248 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109248383743 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210524781808 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.04361770996 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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