"Prevention is better than cure".
Out of a country's health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventive measures.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Health is one of the basic right of humankind, and governments around the globe are constantly finding new ways to combat diseases, and improving infrastructure. It is believed by some to divert a large proportion of country'sq health budget to health education and preventive measures from treatment. In my opinion, it is an effective way of combating diseases.
To begin with, people supporting diversion of funds to preventive Measures proposes several reasons for it. First and foremost, as it is a famous saying that "Prevention is better than cure", so if the disease is prevented before it infect masses will not only save precious lives, but will also reduce government expenses. For example, a large number of infectious diseases are easily prevented like Malaria, typhoid and gastroenteritis by taking care of hygiene. On the contrary, their treatment requires large amount of money. Also, by saving money by this strategy authorities can make use of money on development a projects. Hence it seems great method.
Having said this, it is also true that by doing this there will be less funds available for treatment, and may lead to decline of health standard. Apart from this there are certain diseases which are not preventable for instance, cancer therefore, this policy will not work in such a case. Lastly by adapting it there will be havoc if there is an epidemic due to lack of resources for treatment.
To conclude, although it is an effective and economical way of tackling health problems, but sufficient funds must be allocated for treatment to balance both tires of health. In the future too, it is expected that its popularity will increase worldwide.
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Suggestion: a project; projects
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Suggestion: Hence,
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Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun funds is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...o true that by doing this there will be less funds available for treatment, and may ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, lastly, may, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13405797101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91965820119 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61231884058 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2087987248 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.214285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.298042776322 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0867782084472 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0925324283888 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160016380937 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442761273617 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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