The position of women in society has changed markley in the last 20 years. Many of the problems young people now experience, such as Juvenile delinquency, arise from the fact that many married women now work and not at home I took care for their children.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
In the modern world women place in society has changed significantly with women becoming more independent, and tend to work out doors more often. It is argued by some that because of this modified role of women arises many problems such as Juvenile delinquency. In my opinion, it is not the only factor, and many problems are because of factors outside home.
To begin with, those who support the idea proposes several reasons for this. First, and foremost is that mother is the main source of learning for a child as he spends much of his time at home, where mother can educate him manners, and other attributes necessary for his progression into a sound adult. When mother is working in an office, so she will not be able to look after her children, and specially teenagers who will exploit their freedom and may end up going on a wrong path. For instance, those mothers who do not pay attention to their offspring, so they will end up becoming criminals.
Having said this, there are factors outside home such as peers, internet and television which are major contributors in juvenile delinquency. Children spend majority of their time watching television or surfing internet learning about life, and in the process they learn inappropriate things. Also, friends if bad possess negative effects on child development. For example, many youngsters living in a bad neighborhood eventually become outlaws. Apart from this there are tons of examples of obedient and successful youngsters whose mothers were working women is a compelling evidence in itself.
To conclude, although mothers play a huge role in child development, but it is unfair to put blame of Juvenile delinquency on working mothers, as they are clearly other factors responsible for it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, may, so, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03424657534 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70589558097 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623287671233 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.097786467 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233575313979 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0803125467249 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635162949854 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137926779644 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0868585681291 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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