The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart gives information about spare time enjoyed by men and women of 5 classifications employment status between 1998 and 1999.
Overall, men enjoyed more leisure time than women in three of the categories. There were 2 categories only women counted that people employed part time and housewives.
The spare time people spend was relatively equal and highest when they were unemployed and retired with about over 80 hours a week for men compared to approximately 75 hours a week for women. This figure was considerably lower of people who were employed full time with almost 50 hours for men and nearly 40 hours for women weekly.
Only women investigated in 2 groups which were employed part time and housewives. Housewives enjoyed 50 hours of free time, a little more than women who were employed part time, who had just over 40 leisure hours weekly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...only women counted that people employed part time and housewives. The spare time peopl...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...rably lower of people who were employed full time with almost 50 hours for men and nearly...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...tigated in 2 groups which were employed part time and housewives. Housewives enjoyed 50 h...
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Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ittle more than women who were employed part time, who had just over 40 leisure hours wee...
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Line 7, column 222, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... had just over 40 leisure hours weekly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 725.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96575342466 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60732292936 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547945205479 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 218.7 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2990381933 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.571428571 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 22.9334400587 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.285714285714 5.23603664747 5% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330229398103 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.195499001808 0.103423049105 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862791155021 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252411489903 0.15604864568 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0864338252466 0.0819641961636 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.