The chart below shows the amount of leisure time enjoyed by men and women of different employment status.
The bar chart gives information about the amount of free time attended by men and women with different career statuses according to a specific week in 1998-99.
Looking from an overall perspective, men in all types of employment situations spent more time on leisure activities per week than women in each category, with the exception of housewives and employed part-time.
As the chart portrays, no statistics were presented in the figure for employed part-time and housewives toward men, while those figures in women were 40% and 50% respectively.
Men with employed full-time had approximately 50% of their free time in a week, which was 10% higher compared to the women in the same section. Those proportions showed a significant rise for both males and females in unemployed and retired status. To be precise, an equal amount contributed by the figure of unemployed and, retired (80%) and women, whose leisure time still lower than men, but had been increased to 75%.
- The chart below shows the different levels of post school qualifications in Australia and the proportion of men and women who held them in 1999 50
- The bar chart below shows a survey of a group of young professionals aged 20 30 years who were asked to state which factors motivated them to succeed 89
- A survey conducted for the places in which people gain access to the Internet from 1998 to 2004 95
- The chart shows the average daily minimum and maximum levels of air pollutants in 4 cities 2000 78
- The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 156, Rule ID: WITH_THE_EXCEPTION_OF[1]
Message: Use simply 'except' or 'except for'
Suggestion: except; except for
...s per week than women in each category, with the exception of housewives and employed part-time. As ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0875 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79687325419 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.63125 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5354507508 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.666666667 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6666666667 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 5.23603664747 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415158141531 0.215688989381 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192103932365 0.103423049105 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621538872338 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242548449985 0.15604864568 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0496412060925 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.