The chart below shows the amount of money per week spent on fast foods in Britain graph shows the trends in consumption of fast foods.
write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
While the bar graph denotes the quantity of money that was expended on ready-made meals such as hamburgers,fish and chips and pizza for each week by three various groups of people coming from variety level of salary which was people with high,average and low earnings,the line graph reveals the changes in consuming respective foods between 1970 and 1990 in U.K.
Looking from the overall perspective,as is illustrated by the first figure these prepared foods were highly popular among people,who has got high and average amount of salary,whereas these quick prepared foods were less common among group of people who were earning low salary.Also,it is evident from the information Supplied by the second graph that consumption of hamburgers compared to other fast foods saw a remarkable raise in a 20-year period.
As can be seen by the bar graph the major amount of money went on buying hamburgers among people with satisfying and standard salary which was just over 40 pence per week and slightly more than 30 pence for each week respectively.nevertheless,the least amount of money spent on having pizza by people with normal and minimal earnings which was almost close to 25 pence and just over 5 pence receptively.
As it is apparent from the data provided by the line graph,even though both consumption of hamburgers and pizza climbed exponentially from just under 100 grammes to over 500 grammes , and from approximately 50 grammes to almost close to 300 grammes respectively,the amount of fish and chips that consumed ,saw a steady drop from 300 grammes to over than 200 grammes in a period of 20 years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, nevertheless, second, so, whereas, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 33.7804878049 145% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1352.0 965.302439024 140% => OK
No of words: 267.0 196.424390244 136% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06367041199 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.73543355544 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13144857043 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 106.607317073 139% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554307116105 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 283.868780488 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 89.0 22.4926829268 396% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 199.710345807 43.030603864 464% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 450.666666667 112.824112599 399% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 89.0 22.9334400587 388% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.6666666667 5.23603664747 433% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150076051109 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0945828688175 0.103423049105 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516500362237 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0885690958182 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380276712206 0.0819641961636 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 46.9 13.2329268293 354% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -10.4 61.2550243902 -17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.51609756098 224% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 10.3012195122 357% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 11.4140731707 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.42 8.06136585366 142% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 11.4329268293 490% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 37.6 10.9970731707 342% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.