The bar graph makes a clear comparison between rentals and different sales of movies yearly in a particular shop from 2002 to 2011. As seen, rentals sales have shown its decreasing trend as well as by VHS sales, and on the other hand, blue-ray starts its sales only after half a decade in the graph and has shown little rise each year. Among, DVD sales have the highest sales for most of the years and have the largest market.
To observe, DVD has the highest sales whereas blu-ray has the lowest market. Only, DVD has crossed 200000 number of sales in three consecutive years beginning from 2006. After touching its high in 2007 of around 280000, DVD sales slowly slop down. The rental has the maximum market in 2002 and 2003, making around 185000 at the beginning and gradually decreases each year. VHS has its largest market in 2002 of around 58000, then starts to slow down its sale and totally ends up selling after 2005. Installs its market in 2007, blu-ray makes its high among its bars in 2011, of around 14000. In 2006, there are neither blu-ray nor VHS sales.
To sum up, the DVD has been mostly sold by the shop in the whole decade as shown by the graph.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 236, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...as by VHS sales, and on the other hand, blue-ray starts its sales only after half a deca...
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Line 2, column 47, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...erve, DVD has the highest sales whereas blu-ray has the lowest market. Only, DVD has cr...
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Line 2, column 528, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...fter 2005. Installs its market in 2007, blu-ray makes its high among its bars in 2011, ...
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Line 2, column 619, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...round 14000. In 2006, there are neither blu-ray nor VHS sales. To sum up, the DVD has ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, well, whereas, as well as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 213.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48356807512 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.96326105484 2.65546596893 74% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.530516431925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7129721783 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8181818182 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3636363636 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 5.23603664747 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143444873124 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665428335437 0.103423049105 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756933574635 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0894828250175 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706056725843 0.0819641961636 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.03 61.2550243902 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 11.4140731707 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.88 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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